What I love so far about your poems is the tone, and also the disruption you've built into several of these--like the disjunction between the sense imagery of "I can feel, I can taste" in the poem above, then the disjunction, "The one time/ 99% won't cut it." Cool. Reminds me of the Japanese form of the tanka.
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What I love so far about your poems is the tone, and also the disruption you've built into several of these--like the disjunction between the sense imagery of "I can feel, I can taste" in the poem above, then the disjunction, "The one time/ 99% won't cut it." Cool. Reminds me of the Japanese form of the tanka.
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